The Torturing of.... eh, Goofball [Archive] - Never Forgotten: a Foster's Home Community

Invader Bloo

10-08-2006, 03:52 PM

For us Goofball Haters! It shows a side of Frankie thatshe only shows when she's been mistreated horridly.
Ding!Dong!
Bloo: I guess I'll get it!
Goofball is at door
Goofball: Hey...eh.... Gloo I'm here for a eh..... vacation thingy that lasts a day
Bloo: Hey Frankie! It's Goofball!
Frankie walks by, she has an evil grin on her face
Frankie: Heeeet Goofball! I wanna show you something...Ha,ha,ha
Goofball: Eh, sure.... Ms. Hankie
Frankie: Coco! Call Goo & Cheese to meet someone speacal!!
Coco: Coco coco! *Lays an egg with another phone in it* Coco cococo co!
Goo: *on phone* Oooookay!
A little bit later....
Goo: So Frankie who do you want me to meet huh,huh,huh?
Frankie looked happily at the the two annoying people
Cheese: I like trash cans
Frankie: Cheese,Goo meet Goofball John Mcgee
Goofball: Eh, hey Jeese & Moo
Frankie: Since you already know everyone in the house Goofball....how 'bout you spend some quality with these two!
Goofball:Sure
Frankie puts the 3 in a room with a camera in it
She walks in to the TV room & sits on the couch
Bloo: Hey watcha watching Frankie?
Frankie: A little show called "Goofy & the Annoyings"
Bloo: Pfff... sounds stupid
Bloo sits there
Frankie: So why don't you go to the arcade & watch TV?
Bloo: Ed's watching "Luaren" * Rolls eyes*

*On TV* Goo- So Goofball where you from...OOH! Maybe you're from Asia or Africa because of the elephant nose you got, you know they worship elephants in India I think so you'd be like a god there, didja know that?
Didja,didja,didja,didja,didja?
Goofball *A little freaked out*- Ummm...no?
Goo: Wow, you'd think you know that you're like a god because people probally send you presents & letters all the time. Then you start getting annoyed by it & make a religious rule 'bout not sending stupid letters like "Did you get my other letter Goofball God?" You know?
Cheese *trieing to copy Goo*- Blah,blah,blah,blah,blah,blah,blah,blah,blah,blah, blah,blah,BLAH!
Goofball *Banging on Door* Pleeease let me out! I'm gonna have a horrible...eh head hurt thingy! *sobs*

What will happen to Goofball? Will he die? Does anyone care what happens to him? Find out in "The Torturing of.....Eh Goofball" part 2!
Dun,dun,duuuuun! *Dramitc re-verb!* :-/

Cassini90125

10-08-2006, 04:03 PM

Go on, I'm listening...

(Although to be honest I don't think Frankie would allow even that little vermin to suffer.)

BlooCheese

10-08-2006, 04:24 PM

Wow. Goofball, Goo, and Cheese. What a combination.

Invader Bloo

10-08-2006, 04:30 PM

Yeah, I know but she was feeling angry that day... I just made that up. :P
Bloo: Ah ha ha ha ha ha!
Frankie: I thought you two were friends
Bloo: Oh know before he left he stole my paddleball!
Frankie: Wow... a paddle ball? Don't you have a million paddle balls
Bloo: Yep,.... all broke
Cheese * on TV*- I like cereal
Goofball- *Stops banging on door* Good for you....
Cheese- I LIKE CEREAL! I LIKE TOAST! I LIKE FOURMS! I LIKE THIS HOUSE!
*In Goofball's ear* I LIKE CHOCOLATE MILK!
Goofball- AH! Stop that!
Goo- Aw, come on let's play a game....I know how about what we see! I see something gray
Cheese- Trash cans!
Goo- Nope
Cheese- Candah! *Licks lips*
Goo- Nope
Cheese- Awwww.... Tall red gut with a googley eye?
Goo- Nope that's Wilt
Cheese: A dime!
Goo- Nope
Goofball bangs his head on the door
Goofball- Hairman! Please tell Manny to let me out!
In the TV room....
Bloo: Ha Ha! He called you "Manny"!
Frankie- Stop it Bloo, please
Bloo: Why you gonna put me in there with Cheese, 'cause I have fun with Goo
Frankie- No, I tell Herriman who found the combination to the chest last Halloween
Back on TV....
Cheese: I KNOW milk!
Goo: Nope
Goofball: IT'S A WALL! *eye twitches*
Goo: Yep! It sure is fun wit you Goofball! I not just saying that because you might be a god & kill me with an elephant stanpeed ya know?
Goofball: GLUE! Mo Mo! Ilt! Pac Man! Pleeeeease let me out!
* Near the door* Eduardo- Aaah! Wilt! The door it is talking!
Wilt: Eduardo you're imagining things
Eduardo: Oooh, wait how can I imagine an imaginary talking door, if I is an imaginary friend?
Wilt: No Ed, you think the door is talking to you
Eduardo: Oh thank you senior Wilt, Luaren is back on! *Runs off*
Will Goofball go nuts? Will Eduardo miss a little bit of Luaren? Why do I keep talking like in question form? Find out in the next part!

Cassini90125

10-08-2006, 04:41 PM

Cassini is amused. :D

BlooCheese

10-08-2006, 04:49 PM

Quick! What happens next?

Kzinistzerg

10-08-2006, 04:59 PM

Hehe, I would love to see that.

Candah! is now one of my top favorite words.

Invader Bloo

10-08-2006, 05:41 PM

Wow, people like a fanfic I'm making up as I go. :P Oh yeah the Candahjoke is from AB.Part 3....
Wilt walks into the TV room
Wilt: Hey Bloo! You wanna play with Coco vs. Mac & Me at Basketball?
Bloo: Nope, watching a show
Jacki Khones- Hey Wilt! I'll play!
Wilt-Thanks Jacki!
Frankie- Bye Wilt! I'm watching a verry funny show!
*on TV* Goofball is rolling on the floor
Cheese- Ooh I wanna do that! *starts rolling* This......Is......FUN!
Goo- Hey Goofball why you rolling on the floor like that? Doncha know that bugs like cockroaches & ants & sentipedes &....&.....&...OOH! Dung beetles have probally walked on the floor, I wonder why they call them dung beetles? Maybe because they're made of dung huh,huh,huh? Do you know Goofball? Do you know, do you know, do you know?
Goofball *starts kicking door*- Pleeeease...*sob* let meeee.....ouuuuut!
In TV room....
Bloo: HEY! I got an idea! *Runs off*
Frankie *Thinking*: I wonder he's off to?
What is Bloo doing? Did Eduardo miss a little bit of Lauren? Do I have OCD because I keep talking like this? Find out in part 4!

Voxxyn

10-08-2006, 07:23 PM

Quite nice so far. :)

One Radical Dude

10-08-2006, 07:45 PM

Not bad, but I do have a question -- am I the only one that wouldn't care to have Goofball tortured? :P

Voxxyn

10-08-2006, 08:08 PM

To be honest, the things Goofball has endured in this story so far are a very distant cry from what he actually deserves... but that would be violating the TOS, so I'm cool with what we're currently getting.

Cassini90125

10-08-2006, 08:23 PM

Not bad, but I do have a question -- am I the only one that wouldn't care to have Goofball tortured? :P

I doubt Frankie herself would ever permit it, and I of course would back her 100%. However, that is not the premise of the story. Let us have our fun! :D

Now, in keeping with that premise, I propose that the torturing of Goofball should cease when all of the following conditions are met:

1. He understands that what he did to Frankie is wrong.
2. He understands why what he did to Frankie is wrong.
3. He feels horrible about it.
4. He apologizes, sincerely and publicly, to Frankie.
5. He apologizes, sincerely and publicly, to Frankie's fans.

When these conditions are met, Goofball's torture will be ended. He will then be permitted to live in a small cage in an isolated bunker far beneath the icy wastes of Antarctica, where he can never hurt anyone else ever again.

Sheesh, this guy's been getting a lot of posts lately. Anyone else tired of him?

Sparky

10-08-2006, 09:13 PM

Not bad, but I do have a question -- am I the only one that wouldn't care to have Goofball tortured? :P

No. But I guess that's all I ought to bother saying.

HappyFoppy

10-08-2006, 10:16 PM

Sheesh, this guy's been getting a lot of posts lately. Anyone else tired of him?

Who? Goofball?

Nice fanfic by the way. I'm not that much of a Frankie Fan, but I really hate Goofball for what he did.

Voxxyn

10-09-2006, 02:43 PM

What I really want is for the Foster's crew to acknowledge just how cruel that episode was(i.e. a in-joke allusion in a future episode, or maybe Lauren makes a post about it on this board), and for them to no longer waste their talents and premises on "character bashing" anymore.

If that happens, I'll let my hatred go for good.

Emma

10-09-2006, 06:40 PM

Honestly, I don't really like character bashing in any form...so that includes bashing Goofball. Granted, he was a jerk. I just don't hate him, even though I do love Frankie. To each his/her own I guess.

kageri

10-09-2006, 09:13 PM

Voxxyn

10-09-2006, 09:38 PM

I know that they would never actually bring Goofball back just to bash him. In fact, as pleasing as it is to see him suffer, my real burning desire is to see some form of official acknowledgement that Frankie's ordeal in that episode was just plain cruel and malicious.

Invader Bloo

10-10-2006, 02:16 PM

Yeah, I do post alot.:P I think this would be torture, you'll have to wait & see whta happens to Tardball.:frankiemad: Part 4...

Eduardo: That was the best episode ever! I didn't miss a bit too!
Voice *Banging on door*- Heeeelp meeee!
Eduardo- *Hits head* Stop it senior brain!
Goofball- It's that big furry Chinese guy!......JED!LET ME OUT!
Cheese- I GOT DIATBETES! I GOTS Heart attacks! I got a stroke! I got catavitis! I got puppyvitis! I got oarngeivitis! I got tumor!
Goo- Oh ignore him Goofball, he likes to sya he has all these weird butt diseases, ya know? I mean what is pupivitis? You know what I mean? Do ya? Do ya? Do ya, do ya, do ya, do ya, do ya, do ya? C'mon Goof tell me!
In TV room-
Frankie is laughing so hard
The door opens
Frankie- WHAT!?
In Room....
Bloo- Hey Goofball! I was wondering where you were!
Goofball- Thank you GLOO! I was going to diiiiieee!
Bloo- Oh you were?
SLAM!
Goofball- Noooooooo....*sobs*
Bloo- That's what you get for stealing my paddleball! Ah ha ha ha ha haaaa!:blooevil: Now for somme snacks!
Bloo- I wonder why Bloo did that Goofball!? Maybe because it's because you really did steal his paddleball, did you really did you, did you, did you ,did you, did you ,did you?
Goofball- YES! I did now please shut up!
Goo- Why would you do that why, why ,why, why ,why, why, why, whyyyyyy?
Goofball bangs his head on the door
In TV room....
Bloo *Munching on chips*- Anything happen?
Frankie- Nope. You got me a pop?
Bloo- Here.
Frankie- There butter on that popcorn?
Bloo- Uh-huh
On TV-
Cheese- I like.....
Goofball- Let me guess..... chocolate milk
Cheese- Yes! I also like fishy crackers!
Goofball- CAN SOMEONE HERE ME!?
George Mucas- Why does that say "Don't open?"
New Guy- I dunno maybe a new scribble room?
Goofball- HEEEEEEELP Meee....*sobs*.....eeee!
George looks at New Guy
New Guy- Talking scribbles?
Will Goofball kill him self out of insanity? Is New Guy going to show George some stupid tricks? Will Bloo or Frankie squirt pop out of their noses? Find out in Part 5! :O

Voxxyn

10-10-2006, 02:59 PM

Good stuff, once again. :)

Cassini90125

10-10-2006, 04:14 PM

I continue to be amused. :)

InsaneFan

10-10-2006, 05:28 PM

Haha, this is pretty fun! *claps hands with glee* You got several great quoteable lines in there.

Invader Bloo

10-12-2006, 03:18 PM

Thanks for all the good responses! I may do more fan fics. Hey, Insanefan which ones stick out to you?

Part 5.....
Bloo: Ah, ha, ha, ha, haaaa! Sometimes Frankie your'e the ...*giggles*.... BEST!
Frankie: Sometimes?
Bloo: Yeah sometimes, now shut up & watch! ::)
Frankie glares at Bloo
On the TV.....
Cheese: I like cereal, I like candy, I like frozen yogert, I like nachos, I like tacos, I like burgers...
Goo: Hey Cheese do you know that I meet this one monster type guy who likes all the stuff you do! I think his name waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas..... Ched Chedfurger! He was with a skeleton guy & a scary looking girl!.....&......&....&....&....OOH a big nosed boy!
Cheese: Big nose?!....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAH!
Goofball: STOP HIM!.....*sobs more*....PLEEEEEASE!
Goo: *song* Do a little dance! Now jump on your head & go to sleep! Now shut up before Goof goes locoooooo!
Cheese shut ups
Cheese: I like to dance. *starts drooling on Goofball*
Goofball: Uuuuuugh!
Goo: Stop it Cheese! You should'nt do that ya know because you don't want Goof sick! Ya know!?
Cheese: kkkkkkkkk.....Ooooookay!
Goofball:Awwwwww....
Findout what happens to Goofterd in part 6! Dun...dun....duuuuuun....
Yeah, Iknow this part was short, I could'nt think of anything!

Cassini90125

10-12-2006, 03:26 PM

Cheese: I like to dance. *starts drooling on Goofball*

The image in my head is making me smile. :)

Findout what happens to Goofterd in part 6! Dun...dun....duuuuuun....

LOL! Nicer than some nicknames I've heard for him! :D

Invader Bloo

10-12-2006, 03:37 PM

LOL. The Cheese thing made me luagh when I was typing.

lucyrocks73

10-14-2006, 08:06 AM

Ha... I am also amused by this. As we would say in French, it is "tres amusante". My favorite part so far is when Cheese was trying to imitate Goo.

Now that was genius.

Keep up the good work!!!

-Marty :gooblab:

Invader Bloo

10-16-2006, 03:00 PM

He tried tocopy her in "Big Cheese".
Cheese: I like Cereal, I like cho-co-late milk, I like ice cream, I like spoons, I like to be "Never Forgotten"
A sign pops out while you're reading, "SUCK UP ALERT!"
Cheese: I like ol----
Goofball- Pleeeeease let me out!
Meanwhile....
Bloo & Frankie are laughing!
Frankie squirts pop out of her nose
Bloo points at her & laughs harder
Bloo:Ah ha ha haaaaa!8D
Frankie looks embrassed & goes out to wipe herself off
Mr.Herriman:Ah, Ms.Frances what is for dinner?
Frankie: Uuuuuuh,pizza! Yeah...pizza. I'm about to order it!
Herriman: That sounds quite delicous
Herriman hops off
Mac walks past Frankie
Mac: Hi Frankie! Where's Bloo? I haven't seen him all day, & Goo too.
Frankie: He's in there & Goo hasn't been here all day...Strange I know

Frankie didn't like lieng to her friends but she was trieng to cover the Goofidiot thing up.
Mac: Hey Bloo! Where have you been?
Bloo: Whachin' my new favorite show
Mac: What is it?
Bloo shrugs
Mac: That's stupid, well Bye! We were just taking a break & Wilt's gonna need me.
Mac sips some sports drink & walk's out
Bloo: Phew, that was close
Bloo turns it up louder
On Tv...
Goo: Wow, Goof I wonder where Frankie is because I'm gettin' a lil' sick of you no offense but your'e sorta bossy & all, I mean you may be a like god,but your'e in America now. Not India where they can worship you & all. ya know, ya know, ya know, ya know?!

Goofball just watched the little girl blab on & on & on & on & on....& ON! :gooblab: He noticed Cheese was dancing with slobber coming out of his mouth, it was flieing everywhere...Ugh.
Jhackie Khones walked byhe rolled his eyes.:jk: He wondered what Goo was doing in there in an forbidden room
Mac: *Panting* C'mon Jhackie!
Jhackie: Ok, Mac! Coco & me are still gonna beat you two
Mac: Whatever! He,he,he!
Wilt,Jhackie & Coco join in laughing, they just caught up.
Will Mac & Wilt win the BB game? Will anyone find out about Bloo & Frankie's plan?! Why wasn't there many of these in part 5? Does anyone like these questions?! Does anyone care? Find out in part 7 of "The Torturing Of....eh, Goofball"!

Cassini90125

10-16-2006, 03:11 PM

Cassini: (Giggles)

He tried tocopy her in "Big Cheese".
Cheese: I like Cereal, I like cho-co-late milk, I like ice cream, I like spoons, I like to be "Never Forgotten"
A sign pops out while you're reading, "SUCK UP ALERT!"

(Giggles louder) :D

taranchula

10-16-2006, 04:42 PM

Cheese: I like Cereal, I like cho-co-late milk, I like ice cream, I like spoons, I like to be "Never Forgotten"
A sign pops out while you're reading, "SUCK UP ALERT!"

8D :gooblab: :cheese: :D :P :berry:

LOL!

LaBlooGirl

10-18-2006, 07:14 AM

I too, am amused. :) This is really funny, cheers me up and I need that lately. :D

Invader Bloo

10-18-2006, 03:00 PM

More daily cheerment brought to you by "Chocolate Milk!"! If you don't like it Cheese done not like you! Really fast-*No offense to any Cheese fans who hate choc. milk, brought to you by the "Drink that milk now! God dammit!" association*
Cheese:I like cereal! I like pah-tah-tahs! I like pigs! I like tacos! I like moldy cheese!
Goofball bangs with his feet, head & hands on the door
Frankie walks by with a clean shirt on, she hears & laughs!
Goofball-....Frannie!? That you!?Leeeeeet meeee ouuuuut.....*sobs more*..... I'm-a gonna diiiiiiieee-ah!
Eurotrish walks by
Eurotrish- Hey-a stop-a copying-a me!
Goo- Why are youcopying Eurotrish Goof huh,huh,huh,huh,huhuh.huh!? She's sorta cool besides the fact she's foreign & all. I''m trieng to sound racist but she needs to speak perfect english because that's sorta annoying ya know?
Goofball pretends his hand is a gun & pretends to shoothimself
Goo: What's that mean?Huh,huh,huh,huh,huh?:gooblab:
Cheese: IT MEANS nachoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo....
Goofball:*thinking* I gotta think why Frankie won't let me out.............
He thought while Cheese was still yelling nachos
2 minutes later.....
Goofball:*thinking*Nope can't think of nothing Cheese:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.. ...*pants*....OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOS!:cheese:
In TV room.....
Frankie: I miss anything?
Bloo:*gigiles*...Yeah, Cheese was screaming nachos & he just sat there. I think he's half-dead....AH-HAHHAH-HA-HA!
Will Gooftard die? Will Goo ever shut up? Why do I keep doing this? Find out in part 8!

Cassini90125

10-18-2006, 04:37 PM

It's always nice to read a fanfic that relies on good old fashioned psychological torture for it's entertainment value instead of cutting, slash, angst, or hellspawn. There should be a video of this someday. :D

LaBlooGirl

10-21-2006, 05:53 AM

It's incredibly funny. ^_^

Invader Bloo

10-22-2006, 04:23 PM

Part 8...
Cheese: I like carrots! I like doo doo! I like flowers! I like pots!
Meanwhile...
Bloo: I got an idea!
Bloo rushes off!
Frankie: What's he up to?
The door opens on TV
Bloo: Here you go Cheese...um...PRESENTS!
Bloo throws stuff into the room
Cheese: Yeeeeees!
Cheese runs over to look at his new presents
Cheese: Oooh... Chocolate milk!
He picked a gallon of chocolate milk, he drank some
Goo: Uh-oh!
Goofball:What?
Goo: He's lactose intolerant, maybe he'll get SUPER puffy or sneeze so hard he'll blow the whole house up or do a SUPER fart!
They wait for a while
Goo: Your'e not really lactose intolerant are you Cheese?
Cheese:Khhhhhhh...no
Goo: That's stupid Cheese because you like chocolate milk & you say your'e lactose intolerant but you aren't so you won't be able to drink it, because.....because....because...Um...OOH! They'll think you'll like die then Louise would get sad & angry &...&..&.&...&...um...SUE! Yeah, sue!:gooblab:
Goofball felt like killing himself but he was to lazy too.
Cheese: OOH! Potatoes!
Cheese ran over & pciked up a potato, then he ran over to Gooftard
Cheese: I GOT A PO-TAH-TAH!
Goofball: Yes...*eye twitches*...You do
Cheese: I GOT A POTAOE!:cheese:
He shoved the potatoe in Gooftard's face
Cheese: I LIKE POTATOES!
In the TV room...
Bloo & Frankie were about to die of laughter 8D :frankiesmile:
Bloo: That was the best idea I've ever had! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!
Will Bloo get any better ideas? Will Cheese eat the potatoes? Will Gooftard's head explode? Find out in part 9!

Cassini90125

10-22-2006, 04:37 PM

Part 8...
Cheese: I like carrots! I like doo doo! I like flowers! I like pots!

LMAO!!! Oh, I can just picture him saying that! Brilliant! :D :D :D

Bloo2daMacs

10-22-2006, 07:27 PM

I keep on checking to see if this fic is updated, because let me tell ya, IT'S HILARIOUS!!

keep it up

HappyFoppy

10-23-2006, 02:53 AM

I have to say, it's funny. But I have somthing agiainst the name Gooftard, It makes him look lame. :P

*"Drink that milk now! God dammit!" association*

Does that need to be edited?

Oh well, It's great. Keep it up! I wonder how it will end. (Don't let Goofball explode, die etc. plz? I haate chardeaths.)

Voxxyn

10-23-2006, 04:19 AM

Don't let Goofball explode, die etc. plz? I haate chardeaths.

I agree with this 100%. If Goofball died, how could he endure the pain and suffering he oh-so-very-freaking-much deserves? :P

Cassini90125

10-23-2006, 05:24 AM

Death is too good for him. He must live, so that he may be wracked with an overwhelming sense of guilt and shame for the rest of his miserable life.

Invader Bloo

10-24-2006, 05:56 PM

Cassini90125

10-24-2006, 07:35 PM

Cassini dosen't have a problem with it. He's too busy imagining that Cheese would say Doo doo. ;) J/K! Part 9 & 10 are the last two parts, i'll update tommorow! I'm working on another fan fic which you'll see when this is finished! :D

"Doo doo". Heh, heh, heh. :cheesegrin:

If CN ever decides to, stars forbid, bring Goofball back, I hope they use this thread as the script. :D

Invader Bloo

10-26-2006, 03:35 PM

Hey maybe we should um...*cough start a pettition to get me on the show*cough*....Oh sorry! I have a cold, we should read Part 9!
Cheese: You wanna here a song!?
Goofball: N--
Cheese: BEE BOP BOO BOP BEE BOP BOO Bop boo bop boe bop bee bop boo bop
Goo: I wonder why he's singing that he already gave us the code that one time but that failed so why is he singing again huh, huh, huh?
Goofball *thinking*: I have to get out of here! But how?
Cheese: Boop bop bee boop bop BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Meanwhile...
Frankie: *covering ears*: Bloo?! Did you turn up the volume?
Bloo *covering ears*: NO! Cheese must be screaming loud!
Meanwhile...
Wilt, Coco, Mac & Jhaki stop playing
Jhaki: What the---?
Coco: COCO!
Jhaki: Sorry

Mac's & Terence's Mom look up from her cubicle at work
Mom: What's that?

Terrence & his friends look up
Terrence: The heck is that?
Friend # 1: Sounds like a dieing cat
Terrence & Friends together: Cool!
They rush to look

Cheese: Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...PUH!
Goo: You done?
Cheese:khhhhhhh...Yep
In TV room...
Bloo: Oooooouch my ears here a ringing!
Frankie: Mine too!
Bloo: Oh WELL LET'S WATCH!
Frankie: Why are you yelling?
Bloo: WHAAAT!?
Frankie sighs

Cassini90125

10-26-2006, 04:31 PM

That was a good one. I particularly liked how the scene sfifts around town to show everyone taking notice of Cheese's screaming. Nice touch! :)

Invader Bloo

10-26-2006, 04:34 PM

I had that in my mind for a couple days.

Bloo2daMacs

10-27-2006, 04:49 PM

Terrence & his friends look up
Terrence: The heck is that?
Friend # 1: Sounds like a dieing cat
Terrence & Friends together: Cool!

haha, I can see that happening ;D

Invader Bloo

10-27-2006, 09:16 PM

Yeah Terrence would of probally threw it at one of his friends if there was a dead cat.

Cassini90125

11-08-2006, 07:23 AM

Uh... new chapter anytime soon, dude? ;)

Invader Bloo

11-08-2006, 08:20 AM

Ah! Exactly what I was waiting for...someone to post.
...& now the final chapter
Goofball: I can't take it! *sobs*
Cheese: khhhhhhh....OK
Goofball: I GOTS an IDEA! *pounds head on wall*
BOOM!
Goo: That's just disturbing
Cheese: I like cereal
POP!
The End.

Bloo: WHOAH! How long have I been asleep?
Frankie: About 5 minutes,
Bloo: Oh, did I miss anything funny
Frankie: Nope
On TV.....
Cheese: I like mooses! I like pigs! I like pop! I like tacos!
Goofball: Frannie HELP ME! I'll never get riiiiiii*sobs more*d.... of these mental scars! I'll have nightmares ever.....*sobs*...eeey night!
Goo: What did you do to Frankie to make her lock you up with Cheese & me, because I know I can be a little annoying but that's OK 'cause I like to annoy people who steal & did something to Frankie, don't shoot me with elephant god lightning but that's not right ya know?:gooblab:
In TV room...
Bloo: HA HA! Take that you jerk! HA! I really wish you would explode!
Frankie: What are you talking about?
Bloo: A dream! HA!HA ha!
Frankie shook her head
Wilt & Mac won
Wilt & Mac: We won Coco & Jhaki, fare & square!
Coco: Co coco!
Jhaki: Yeah, what she said.
Wilt: I'm sorry but we did win!
Bloo: GET OUT...NOW!
Frankie: Bloo!
Bloo: *mumbles*please
Wilt: Oh OK, sorry for interrupting your show
Mac: You guys still watching that show?
Bloo: Marathon... now GET OUT!
*on TV*
Cheese: I looooooove 'dis game!
Cheese was rolling on the floor
Cheese rolled on Goofball
Cheese: I like this game
Goofball: Awwww....FRANNIE LET ME OUT!
Meanwhile...
Frankie & Bloo were laughing VERY hard
Bloo: Take that! Now you know how I felt when you took my paddleball
Frankie: Who are you talking to?
Bloo stopped
On TV....
Goofball:....*sobs*....I'm.....*sobs*....Soooooooo rrrry!
In TV room....
Frankie stopped laughing
Frankie: What did he say?
Bloo: He said he's....tee hee... Sorry! Ah ha ah ah ha! *coughs*
Frankie walks out
Bloo: FRANKIE!? What are you doing!?
Frankie: He said what I wanted him to
Bloo:NO! You hate him...don't you!?
Frankie: Yes but he apologized
Bloo: Oh no you....
SLAM!
The door opens
Cheese runs off of Goofball
Goofball:....*eye twitches*...Thaaaank yoooou!
Frankie: yeah,whatever
Goofball runs out, never to return to the house again
Goo: What did he do to you?
Frannkie retold the horrid episode to Goo
Goo: Wow, what a jerk
Frankie: Mmm, hmmm
Bloo:You suck Frankie
Frankie shook her head again at Bloo
Frankie: next time I'll put you in there with just Cheese
Bloo: AH! I'm sorry! I'm sorry!

That's it! My next story should be up later today, it will be in regular format!