Crooked Smile

[Vampyre]

Hello there! I have my own fanfic on FF.net and I was wondering what you guys all though of it.

Summary:It's that time of year again, where Imaginary Friends from all over the world are transported to Foster's and one inparticular catches Wilt's eye. But when he begins to fall for the British girl, an unusual turn of events strikes Foster's as Berry returns.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3016285/1/

I hope you like it and if you have an account on there PLEASE review

EDIT ~ When I first posted my story here, I wasn't planning on things being particularly, you now, intimate. But, now the story has progressed alot and the story is getting deeper, I felt I should warn any future readers that there are a few breif, sexual scenes, nothing major, but enough for me to consider upping the rating to M at some point... I dunno, I may ask for advice on that *shrugs* Still, I'm to tackle a very sensitive subject in time, and that, along with future interactions between Wilt and Zigzag (And possibly another character) as readers get further into the story, may be ineed of a warning before hand. OK? Good, OK...

[Bloofanatic]

I'm Robotboyfan there and I think you're fanfic is pretty cool keep it up

[Thornwhistle]

Ok,I'm interested,I'll take the time to read your fanfic.

[Vampyre]

aww yay some ones interested! Thank you for reading I appreciate

[Thornwhistle]

I read your story and liked how Wilt met a potential new girlfriend.

[Vampyre]

I'm glad the people who ahve commented on this thread like it, and I'll give everyone a heads up when I get the enw chpter done and posted ^__^

[Vampyre]

Finally! I've got the next chapter up, so for those of you who are bothered enough to look at the thread and read the story: Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/13/

["C" the Dragon]

I like the new chapter! It's great! I can't wait to see them together!

[InsaneFan]

*bounces* No need to comment. x3

[Vampyre]

Here's Chapter 14!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/14/

It's not as long as the first one, but hey, I have writers block again!

[antgirl1]

Issues with privacy...XDD

And plus how Zigzag keeps screwing up on Foul Larry's name. XD

[pitbulllady]

Issues with privacy...XDD

And plus how Zigzag keeps screwing up on Foul Larry's name. XD

That part kept making me think of Bloo constantly screwing up Berry's name!
Anyone remember the movie, All of Me, with Steve Martin and Lily Tomlin? There was a bathroom scene in that movie which was very much like this one, except that Tomlin's character, a stuck-up, persnickity millionairess, had recently passed away, and a spirit medium she'd hired to transfer her soul into the body of a younger woman messed up and transfered it into the body of Martin's character, so they were both sharing the same space, so to speak. Tomlin's character controlled HIS voluntary movement, though, which made for a VERY interesting ordeal when he had to visit the men's room, lol! The fact that poor Wilt only has one hand, and it's chained to someone else's hand, would make things really inconvenient for him at that time...issues with privacy, indeed!

pitbulllady

[Vampyre]

I just got a pretty angry flame from someone on this story. The reviewer goes by the name of Flame Rising, and it seems that he/she has a pretty big problem with alot of stories from many different catergories. It seems he aims for the ones with OC's in to pick on. Here's what they wrote:

Good God. A f***ing piece of s*** from my a** could write better than this. How old are you? Five? Six?

What the f*** is wrong with you that you think you can write a story people want to read? The only people that like this crack-out piece of s*** are other inbreds like you.

Please, do the rest of humanity a favor and never, ever write anything again.

Just to make sure, maybe you should jump off a cliff.

Got it?
Good.

F/R

I just don't what the point if in flaming people like this. They can be terribly insulting.

[antgirl1]

Vampyre, if you didn't notice, this is the EXACT same review he copied from the flame from another story. DON'T LISTEN TO THAT MORON. That moron never even authored a STORY. Instead, he lives up to his pen name and flame anybody and everybody, even if the story is well written. He's only spamming your reviews. And he's probably also jealous because he may not be able to write HIMSELF. He never submitted a story.

In the story "Restaurant Stop", he left that SAME EXACT review.

I even wrote my own review to defend you, and I won't care if he flames back.

He's just a spammer.

[Vampyre]

Thanks a bunch AntGirl. I really appreciate the support ^__^