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EleFlameMax · 04-29-2007, 01:53 PM

The interpretation of Eduardo and Coco was nearly spot on, and Zigzag was a nice character. That said, I didn't quite like the way you portrayed Blooregard Q. Kazoo, he's not really a soft guy. More of a zany, selfish always-on-his-feet-guy. But I digress, this is about Wilt for the most part, and he was well presented throughout.

04-29-2007, 01:53 PM	#31
EleFlameMax Newly Abandoned Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 7	I liked the first chapter. The interpretation of Eduardo and Coco was nearly spot on, and Zigzag was a nice character. That said, I didn't quite like the way you portrayed Blooregard Q. Kazoo, he's not really a soft guy. More of a zany, selfish always-on-his-feet-guy. But I digress, this is about Wilt for the most part, and he was well presented throughout. __________________ Image violated forum rules Click here for further details Last edited by EleFlameMax; 04-29-2007 at 01:56 PM.