Sure, I’d be happy to give your work a proof read for you. I mean, I don’t have any teaching qualifications at the time being (I started the TA course at the beginning of spring), and I can’t guarantee that I’ll think exactly as your teacher does – so I wouldn’t, by any means, accept my opinion as infallible, but I certainly don’t mind having a look at it if it’ll help you out. Feel free to PM it to me whenever you're ready. 
