My fanfiction trilogy - COMPLETED! - Never Forgotten: a Foster's Home Community

Fomalhaut · 08-27-2006, 10:14 AM

To those who have read my trilogy so far, here's the link to Long Forgotten Feelings - just added the very last chapter! Reviews are welcome.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2714646/1/

To those who haven't, search for "Fomalhaut" on ff.net to find them.
1st part: The Destiny of an Imaginary Friend (Incomplete) - it's about an IF, Shaula, and her (pretty weird) arrival at Foster's.
2nd part: Love at First Fight - Terrence gets a crush on Shaula's evil creator, Sheila, and she has plans that involve him against Foster's.
3rd part: Long Forgotten Feelings: Sheila's plan unfolds...

Sparky · 08-27-2006, 11:42 AM

That was a good ending!!

(What happened to Shaula 2?)

Fomalhaut · 08-27-2006, 11:59 AM

She stayed with Sheila, of course.
Did you review?

Sparky · 08-27-2006, 02:34 PM

Not yet.

Cassini90125 · 08-28-2006, 10:55 AM

I read it, and I was happy. It's so nice to be able to read a good Foster's story once in a while. Well done!

Fomalhaut · 08-28-2006, 11:21 AM

Can you tell me a bit more? One of your good critiques, detailed review I like so much? Please!

Cassini90125 · 08-28-2006, 01:00 PM

(Sighs) My work never ends.

I'll have something up before long, although likely not until tomorrow.

Cassini90125 · 08-28-2006, 11:53 PM

Okay, the review is up.

Fomalhaut · 08-29-2006, 03:51 AM

Thanks a lot, have already read it!

Oh, my reasons for the ending:
- If there were 2 romances, the short plot would have looked like this:
A new friend arrives at Foster's, but her evil owner takes Terrence in a plan agains the home, but, thanks to the friend, who in the meantime has fallen in love, and returned, with Wilt, her plan is foiled. And she falls in love with Terrence, and they're happy. - now, that's when I say: "GAH! MARY_SUE!!!"
- 1 romance:... enough said.
- no romance at all: readers throwing bricks: I WAS EXPECTING ELSE, DUH!!!"

- only suggestions, as I did: I think it's fine.

08-27-2006, 10:14 AM	#1
Fomalhaut Who speaks like Goo and sings like Eurotrish Sing with me, Eurotrish! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The world of dreams Posts: 935	My fanfiction trilogy - COMPLETED! To those who have read my trilogy so far, here's the link to Long Forgotten Feelings - just added the very last chapter! Reviews are welcome. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2714646/1/ To those who haven't, search for "Fomalhaut" on ff.net to find them. 1st part: The Destiny of an Imaginary Friend (Incomplete) - it's about an IF, Shaula, and her (pretty weird) arrival at Foster's. 2nd part: Love at First Fight - Terrence gets a crush on Shaula's evil creator, Sheila, and she has plans that involve him against Foster's. 3rd part: Long Forgotten Feelings: Sheila's plan unfolds... __________________ "Up in the sky, there's a star for everyone" Last edited by Fomalhaut; 08-27-2006 at 10:34 AM.

08-27-2006, 11:42 AM	#2
Sparky Undisputed Ruler of Terrencania Am not Slave-O-Matic! Am Johnny Five! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Sacramento, CA Posts: 5,711	That was a good ending!! (What happened to Shaula 2?) __________________ Custom Machine Embroidery & More

08-27-2006, 11:59 AM	#3
Fomalhaut Who speaks like Goo and sings like Eurotrish Sing with me, Eurotrish! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The world of dreams Posts: 935	She stayed with Sheila, of course. Did you review? __________________ "Up in the sky, there's a star for everyone"

08-27-2006, 02:34 PM	#4
Sparky Undisputed Ruler of Terrencania Am not Slave-O-Matic! Am Johnny Five! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Sacramento, CA Posts: 5,711	Not yet. __________________ Custom Machine Embroidery & More

08-28-2006, 10:55 AM	#5
Cassini90125 The Postmaster Love gives you courage that's stronger than anything! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Saturn Posts: 6,645	I read it, and I was happy. It's so nice to be able to read a good Foster's story once in a while. Well done! __________________ "Frankie! That weird kid is using a flower pot for a cup!" Sailor Moon. Best Anime EVER.

08-28-2006, 11:21 AM	#6
Fomalhaut Who speaks like Goo and sings like Eurotrish Sing with me, Eurotrish! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The world of dreams Posts: 935	Can you tell me a bit more? One of your good critiques, detailed review I like so much? Please! __________________ "Up in the sky, there's a star for everyone"

08-28-2006, 01:00 PM	#7
Cassini90125 The Postmaster Love gives you courage that's stronger than anything! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Saturn Posts: 6,645	(Sighs) My work never ends. I'll have something up before long, although likely not until tomorrow. __________________ "Frankie! That weird kid is using a flower pot for a cup!" Sailor Moon. Best Anime EVER.

08-28-2006, 11:53 PM	#8
Cassini90125 The Postmaster Love gives you courage that's stronger than anything! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Saturn Posts: 6,645	Okay, the review is up. __________________ "Frankie! That weird kid is using a flower pot for a cup!" Sailor Moon. Best Anime EVER.

08-29-2006, 03:51 AM	#9
Fomalhaut Who speaks like Goo and sings like Eurotrish Sing with me, Eurotrish! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The world of dreams Posts: 935	Thanks a lot, have already read it! Oh, my reasons for the ending: - If there were 2 romances, the short plot would have looked like this: A new friend arrives at Foster's, but her evil owner takes Terrence in a plan agains the home, but, thanks to the friend, who in the meantime has fallen in love, and returned, with Wilt, her plan is foiled. And she falls in love with Terrence, and they're happy. - now, that's when I say: "GAH! MARY_SUE!!!" - 1 romance:... enough said. - no romance at all: readers throwing bricks: I WAS EXPECTING ELSE, DUH!!!" - only suggestions, as I did: I think it's fine. __________________ "Up in the sky, there's a star for everyone"