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Originally Posted by Ub3rD4n
Yesterday I came down with something awful (I even got out of work for it) and I got tired a lot faster than I thought I would because of that.(Yes, I know. Excuses, excuses). I'm still not in what you'd call prime mental condition (even for me), but I've been on this fanfic for long enough, and it needs to be finished soon, so here we go:
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I hope you're not feeling unduly pressured to complete this story quickly, especially if you've been sick, but I like where it's going and the way the various plot threads are converging. The one thing in this story that had me a little worried was Bloo's speech defending Frankie in Chapter 1, which seemed slightly out-of-character (and which wouldn't be worth mentioning except for the fact that everyone in your stories is usually very in-character), but he's been very much his usual self since then, and I'm eager to see how his investigation concludes.