I would definately change how "Everyone Knows It's Bendy" ended, with Bendy actually getting caught doing something bad and blaming someone else, so that Frankie and Herriman would see what a little lying snot he really was, and they would both apologize to the main characters that they'd blamed and punished for all the bad things that Bendy did.
I'd also have to do something about "The Buck Swaps Here", since that part with Wilt becoming overheated and dehydrated and desparately wanting something to drink is just painful to watch, unless you're a Wilt-hater. I'd have him be able to slake that burning thirst one way or the other, preferably by Eduardo making the right decision to use that $100.00 bill to help out his friend, as he originally intended, and then having the others repay his generosity by buying him that Barbie house. It bugs me that in the end, the others felt bad about Ed not getting something to play with, but no one felt bad about someone else's life being in actual danger(and don't try to tell me that being overheated and dehydrated isn't life-threatening).
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