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Crash-N-Cortex · 01-09-2007, 09:37 PM

The Camping Trip (Part three)

The next morning, everybody woke up. Mac asked Cortex, "Don't you just love the fresh-morning air?" Cortex answered, "Everything sucks! I'm hungry, I'm didn't get any sleep, I don't want to be here, and above all Crash Bandicoot breath stinks!" Mac then said, "We should have breakfast, I'm starving." Bloo asked Mac, "But what are going to eat?" Crash's tummy is rumbling which means he should eat as soon as possible. Goo had an idea, "Oh, I know we should have fish and some honey." "Honey?" Mac and Bloo asked Goo. "Yes! Honey," Goo answered. Goo then said to the group, "Okay, me and Mac are going to get fresh water from the stream, Bloo and Crash will go fishing, and Cortex will go get us some honey. Cortex then thought of the sight of eating fish and honey and this was his response: "Disgusting". "Okay, we'll see you guys later," Bloo said to Mac and Goo while he went with Crash to find a good fishing spot.

In the woods, Cortex was looking for some honey and he came upon a beehive. "There's a stupid beehive," Cortex said as he approached the bee-hive. He stuck his hand into the beehive and said, "I just take some honey and go." Just then, something stung Cortex. Cortex pulled his hand out to realize that he has been stung by a bee. Then Cortex is starting angry at the beehive, so he punched the bee-hive and yelled, "IDIOTIC BEEHIVE!" Just then a swarm of bees came out of the beehive and they were angry at Cortex for punching their hive so they stung mostly around his head since it is so big. Cortex screamed as he started running. The bees kept stinging him that he couldn't see where he is going (mostly because Cortex closed his eyes so the bees wouldn't sting his eyes). Cortex blindly ran toward a broken down bridge and the bees kept stinging him and he still can't see! Cortex realizes the bees stop stinging him only to find out that he was falling! Cortex screamed as he was about to fall into the river.

Meanwhile, at the fishing spot at the river, Bloo and Crash was waiting for a catch since they hadn't catch anything all day. Bloo was bored while Crash was sleeping. Mac and Goo came back with some fresh water. "We're back!" Goo said in sing-song voice to Bloo and Crash. Crash woke up to the sound of Goo's voice. "So, did you catch any fish?" Mac asked. Bloo answered, "No, we hadn't had a bite for hours." Just then Bloo's fishing pole was bobbing up and down. "I caught something!" Bloo screamed as he attempted to reel in his catch, "It sure is heavy, I could use a little help here!" Mac, Goo, and Crash helped Bloo reel in his catch. His catch of the day was none other then Dr. Cortex. "Dr. Cortex?" Bloo said as he looked at him. The group helped reel in Dr. Cortex, luckliy he's still alive. Crash had caught something on his fishing rod. He reeled it in and it was a power crystal. He decided to keep his catch. Bloo walked up to Cortex and said, "Do you manage to get us some honey?" Cortex then said, "I'm... going...", and then he yelled "HOME!!" Goo then said, "Yeah, it is getting late." "Our friends must be very worried about us," Mac replied. "Well, I had some fun", Bloo said sarcastically. The five soon we on their way back to Foster's. Bloo then said to Cortex, "When do you think we should go on our next trip?" Cortex answered in just two words, "Shut up."

The End

Well, that was my fanfic. I put a lot of effort into typing this. I think it looks great, I just need your opinion. (BTW: If you still don't know about the Crash Bandicoot characters, I put up information about them in my thread: "My Upcoming Fanfic" in the Fan-Fic section.) I will start on my fanfic "Foster's Twinsanity" some time this week possibly Friday as long as I get my schoolwork out of the way.

01-09-2007, 09:37 PM	#3
Crash-N-Cortex Permanent Resident I'm back with my Chimchar! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Barstow, California Posts: 389	The Camping Trip (Part three) The next morning, everybody woke up. Mac asked Cortex, "Don't you just love the fresh-morning air?" Cortex answered, "Everything sucks! I'm hungry, I'm didn't get any sleep, I don't want to be here, and above all Crash Bandicoot breath stinks!" Mac then said, "We should have breakfast, I'm starving." Bloo asked Mac, "But what are going to eat?" Crash's tummy is rumbling which means he should eat as soon as possible. Goo had an idea, "Oh, I know we should have fish and some honey." "Honey?" Mac and Bloo asked Goo. "Yes! Honey," Goo answered. Goo then said to the group, "Okay, me and Mac are going to get fresh water from the stream, Bloo and Crash will go fishing, and Cortex will go get us some honey. Cortex then thought of the sight of eating fish and honey and this was his response: "Disgusting". "Okay, we'll see you guys later," Bloo said to Mac and Goo while he went with Crash to find a good fishing spot. In the woods, Cortex was looking for some honey and he came upon a beehive. "There's a stupid beehive," Cortex said as he approached the bee-hive. He stuck his hand into the beehive and said, "I just take some honey and go." Just then, something stung Cortex. Cortex pulled his hand out to realize that he has been stung by a bee. Then Cortex is starting angry at the beehive, so he punched the bee-hive and yelled, "IDIOTIC BEEHIVE!" Just then a swarm of bees came out of the beehive and they were angry at Cortex for punching their hive so they stung mostly around his head since it is so big. Cortex screamed as he started running. The bees kept stinging him that he couldn't see where he is going (mostly because Cortex closed his eyes so the bees wouldn't sting his eyes). Cortex blindly ran toward a broken down bridge and the bees kept stinging him and he still can't see! Cortex realizes the bees stop stinging him only to find out that he was falling! Cortex screamed as he was about to fall into the river. Meanwhile, at the fishing spot at the river, Bloo and Crash was waiting for a catch since they hadn't catch anything all day. Bloo was bored while Crash was sleeping. Mac and Goo came back with some fresh water. "We're back!" Goo said in sing-song voice to Bloo and Crash. Crash woke up to the sound of Goo's voice. "So, did you catch any fish?" Mac asked. Bloo answered, "No, we hadn't had a bite for hours." Just then Bloo's fishing pole was bobbing up and down. "I caught something!" Bloo screamed as he attempted to reel in his catch, "It sure is heavy, I could use a little help here!" Mac, Goo, and Crash helped Bloo reel in his catch. His catch of the day was none other then Dr. Cortex. "Dr. Cortex?" Bloo said as he looked at him. The group helped reel in Dr. Cortex, luckliy he's still alive. Crash had caught something on his fishing rod. He reeled it in and it was a power crystal. He decided to keep his catch. Bloo walked up to Cortex and said, "Do you manage to get us some honey?" Cortex then said, "I'm... going...", and then he yelled "HOME!!" Goo then said, "Yeah, it is getting late." "Our friends must be very worried about us," Mac replied. "Well, I had some fun", Bloo said sarcastically. The five soon we on their way back to Foster's. Bloo then said to Cortex, "When do you think we should go on our next trip?" Cortex answered in just two words, "Shut up." The End Well, that was my fanfic. I put a lot of effort into typing this. I think it looks great, I just need your opinion. (BTW: If you still don't know about the Crash Bandicoot characters, I put up information about them in my thread: "My Upcoming Fanfic" in the Fan-Fic section.) I will start on my fanfic "Foster's Twinsanity" some time this week possibly Friday as long as I get my schoolwork out of the way. Last edited by Crash-N-Cortex; 01-09-2007 at 09:38 PM.