Crooked Smile
 

Hello there! I have my own fanfic on FF.net and I was wondering what you guys all though of it.

Summary:It's that time of year again, where Imaginary Friends from all over the world are transported to Foster's and one inparticular catches Wilt's eye. But when he begins to fall for the British girl, an unusual turn of events strikes Foster's as Berry returns.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3016285/1/

I hope you like it and if you have an account on there PLEASE review :D

EDIT ~ When I first posted my story here, I wasn't planning on things being particularly, you now, intimate. But, now the story has progressed alot and the story is getting deeper, I felt I should warn any future readers that there are a few breif, sexual scenes, nothing major, but enough for me to consider upping the rating to M at some point... I dunno, I may ask for advice on that *shrugs* Still, I'm to tackle a very sensitive subject in time, and that, along with future interactions between Wilt and Zigzag (And possibly another character) as readers get further into the story, may be ineed of a warning before hand. OK? Good, OK...

I'm Robotboyfan there and I think you're fanfic is pretty cool keep it up

Ok,I'm interested,I'll take the time to read your fanfic. :D

aww yay some ones interested! Thank you for reading I appreciate :D

I read your story and liked how Wilt met a potential new girlfriend.

I'm glad the people who ahve commented on this thread like it, and I'll give everyone a heads up when I get the enw chpter done and posted ^__^

Finally! I've got the next chapter up, so for those of you who are bothered enough to look at the thread and read the story: Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/13/

I like the new chapter! It's great!:D I can't wait to see them together!

*bounces* No need to comment. x3

Here's Chapter 14!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/14/

It's not as long as the first one, but hey, I have writers block again!

Issues with privacy...XDD

And plus how Zigzag keeps screwing up on Foul Larry's name. XD

That part kept making me think of Bloo constantly screwing up Berry's name!
Anyone remember the movie, All of Me, with Steve Martin and Lily Tomlin? There was a bathroom scene in that movie which was very much like this one, except that Tomlin's character, a stuck-up, persnickity millionairess, had recently passed away, and a spirit medium she'd hired to transfer her soul into the body of a younger woman messed up and transfered it into the body of Martin's character, so they were both sharing the same space, so to speak. Tomlin's character controlled HIS voluntary movement, though, which made for a VERY interesting ordeal when he had to visit the men's room, lol! The fact that poor Wilt only has one hand, and it's chained to someone else's hand, would make things really inconvenient for him at that time...issues with privacy, indeed!

pitbulllady

I just got a pretty angry flame from someone on this story. The reviewer goes by the name of Flame Rising, and it seems that he/she has a pretty big problem with alot of stories from many different catergories. It seems he aims for the ones with OC's in to pick on. Here's what they wrote:

Good God. A f***ing piece of s*** from my a** could write better than this. How old are you? Five? Six?

What the f*** is wrong with you that you think you can write a story people want to read? The only people that like this crack-out piece of s*** are other inbreds like you.

Please, do the rest of humanity a favor and never, ever write anything again.

Just to make sure, maybe you should jump off a cliff.

Got it?
Good.

F/R

I just don't what the point if in flaming people like this. They can be terribly insulting.

Vampyre, if you didn't notice, this is the EXACT same review he copied from the flame from another story. DON'T LISTEN TO THAT MORON. That moron never even authored a STORY. Instead, he lives up to his pen name and flame anybody and everybody, even if the story is well written. He's only spamming your reviews. And he's probably also jealous because he may not be able to write HIMSELF. He never submitted a story.

In the story "Restaurant Stop", he left that SAME EXACT review.

I even wrote my own review to defend you, and I won't care if he flames back.

He's just a spammer.

Thanks a bunch AntGirl. I really appreciate the support ^__^

Check out this person's(and I use that term VERY loosely)profile-he/she has signed up on FF.Net for the sole purpose of flaming every writer of fanfiction on there, and plainly states this, with the same amount of profanity. He/she also boasts that there is absolutely nothing that anyone can do about it. Well, we shall see about that. Since FF.net apparently has done away with their "Help" option, I had to use the review abuse report to report them, but I made sure to plainly state that I was NOT reporting your story, but the reviewer, and I included a link to "Rising Flame's"(now THAT ought to clue everyone into this individual's purpose)profile page, so that the admins can read it for themselves. I couldn't figure out any other way to contact them, since there is no longer that option on the homepage for contacting them or reporting bugs, not that I can see. This individual apparently hates FF.net, and everyone on it, and is out to make that point. Most likely it's someone who's been kicked off before.

By the way, you DO have a "Block" option in your profile, which allows you to block any registered user, as well as anonymous reviews, from posting a review. That way, idiots like this cannot post reviews to your stories, so they will be wasting their time trying to. You can also delete reviews, so you don't have to leave it there.

pitbulllady

I've never noticed the block before. Hah, I wasn't even aware anyone could do that XD

I think it's silly that there isn't any way of properly contacting the fanfiction support or what ever it was called. Not only that, but I think there IS a bug going on, either because of FF.net or my stupid email system. Under normal circumstances when you submit a new chapter or story, you always get a email about it, and the same ehappens when you submit a post in one of the forums. I posted up the 14th chapter about three days ago and I left a post in the Frankie Wilt section the following day and I haven't received a single email telling me about them OR my reviews on the chapter.

I HAVE seen the reviews though, so I'd just like to say thanks ^__^

Oh, great. It's now happening on FF.net. What's next? Please not here.:( Also, what's "Restraut Stop"? Anyways, good chapter! You're doing good so far! I can't wait to see how it ends!:D

'Resturant Shop' is a fanfiction that was posted jst the other day. It's supposed to be a pardoy of something, but I haven't read it yet so I can't give you that much info. Sorry.

And also, thank you very much, but if you mean you can't wait to see how the story ends then you may wanna get comfortable, because we've got a LOOONG way to go XD

Yeah, I'm not getting emails of reviews or forum posts, either, even though they've been made. The FAQ and the Help sections have disappeared completely, and when I click on "Extras", I get a message telling me that this will not be available to free subscribers, and that more information will be available later, so apparently, like DA, FF.net is going to a system where you have to PAY to get the full benefits and use all of their features, which sucks, if you ask me. Still, you can block whomever you like from posting reviews, or set it to not accept reviews from anyone not signed in. I've already done just that for this particular rectal orifice. It would NOT surprise me in the least if this does not turn out to be one of the same trolls from TV.com, taking out their anger on Foster's fans, since so far, that seems to be the only section "hit" by this moron.

pitbulllady

I don't believe he has reviewed any other stories, but he's created a C2 about all sorts of catergories, and out of interest, I took a look and I don't think I saw a single Foster story. Hmm... Well I must say this isn't the worst review I've had. I remember this one anonymous reviewer whom still surfs among the Kids Next door catergory, used to litter perfectly good stories with the 'F' word and then go botehr some other stories with the same couples in it. I find it TERRIBLY annoying when people do this, because not only can it be rather insulting, but it also baffles me WHY people do it, and what the point of it is.

So far I really, really like your story Vampyre!

Apparently this guy thinks its his JOB to flame people, but meh... he needs to get a life if that's the case. It's kinda sad when you think about it.... 8D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/15/

Ladies and Jellyfish, I give you Chapter Fifteen

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/16/

Chapter 16

Sara did that to Zigzag? Oh noes. D=

Oh wow......that chapter was kinda intense O_O
I really liked it though......I can't wait for the next one! Please Hurry!

.......I should probably review on fanfiction huh?

In a way I SUPPOSE she did, but it's not that simple. There's a WHOLE lot more to it.

Sorry that I haven't been posting much.:P The story's going great, though.:D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/17/

Woo, chapter Seventeen!

It's going good, so far!:D But I skipped "Zigzag's dare", since I KNOW what's gonna happen.:P But that doesn't mean it makes the story more dramatic and cool!:D

I liked the first chapter.
 

The interpretation of Eduardo and Coco was nearly spot on, and Zigzag was a nice character. That said, I didn't quite like the way you portrayed Blooregard Q. Kazoo, he's not really a soft guy. More of a zany, selfish always-on-his-feet-guy. But I digress, this is about Wilt for the most part, and he was well presented throughout.

The first chapter was written back in August, so, not to toot my own horn or anything, but my writing has gotten a LOT better since then, mostly in writing out the character's. Bloo didn't REALLY have that mcuh of a part in the first chapter, other wise I'd have probably been able to get him alittle more in character. Sorry.

Yeah... Chapter 18. Here we go

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/18/

Looks like Wilt has finally figured out his feelings for her. Oh no, poor Wilt!:(

Ouch...Zigzag really tore Wilt's heart apart there. I can imagine Evanescence's song "Even in Death" playing as I read that argument.

I actually had tears in my eyes from this chapter. And usually for stories, it's hard to crack me open to emotions.

Well done, I say.

Thank you very much guys :D

Yeah, poor Wilt! I left a review over on FF.net, by the way. That scene reminded me of one in the old series, "Moonlighting", when "David"(played by Bruce Willis with HAIR) finally realized his feelings for his co-worker, "Maddie"(Cybil Shepherd), and was convinced by a bunch of old Black dudes to tell her how he felt(he'd told them of his feelings for this woman, now he's got to finally tell HER). After buying a "Flower for the Dead" from this old Latino woman who kept showing up offering them for sale, David goes running over to Maddie's appartement to tell her how he feels, only to see her going into the apartment accompanied by her old college beau, played by Mark Harmon. He just stands there in the shadows outside, as it starts to pour down rain, and he finally just turns and slams the flower into a nearby garbage can and walks off, defeated. That's exactly how it seemed for Wilt, going to bring Ziz a rose, only to have her tell him that she has accepted a date from another guy.

pitbulllady

Woah! Bruce Willis with hair?! Now THAT would have been interesting to see.

Anyway, here we go, guys, Chapter Nineteen.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106285/19/

Poor, poor Wilt.

Yeah, that's all I can say at this point.

Here it is guys, finally...

Chapter 20: Tattling