I read ch. 21 this morning-- when I got the email saying it was up I almost burst! XD XD XD

Amen to that!

Oh, no... Is more bad stuff gonna happen?! :wiltshock: AAAH!

UPDATE SOON! I can't stand the suspense!

EVERYONE loves how much of an arse you are! LOL!8D

Honestly, though, the dialouge for Meredith was spot on. SPOT. ON. Perfect for a 5 year old girl.

As for Wilt getting his feelings hurt, well, that's just par for the course in romance, isn't it?

I, too, am enjoying what an arse you are-- it makes for good writing, and reading for us!

I think Ub3rD4n is right-- a little hurting is par in romance. I felt like my heart got squished a little romantically speaking this morning, in fact.

It took me forever, but I finally dropped you a review.

Thanks so much, WiltsAKGirl and Ub3rd4n, your comments are, like, ultra appreciated. Seriously.

Also, I got your review WiltsAKGirl, and I've left one for you on your story too :D

I hate to double post again, really I do, but, believe it or not guys, I actually have ANOTHER chapter! You know why?! 'Cos I haven't done any of my homework yet!

Chapter 22: Instincts

Enjoy!

Kidnapping? Grand theft auto? Going half a country away from Fosters? Sounds like something Bloo would do. Wilt MUST be crazy about her. Or just plain crazy.

BTW, Coco cola?;)

Yes, Coco Cola, 'cos I'm cool XD.

We know that Wilt can makes some pretty insane decisions. I mean, risking his life in Good Wilt Hunting to try and win back the approval of his creator. I'd imagine Wilt would do anything to hold something important to him in place, even if that means doing a runner.

Wow. Wilt is nuts. XDD

I left you a review over on FF.net, but this one took me totally by surprise! Still, like you said, Wilt has already proven that he's willing to do anything for a cause he really believes in, even die for it if need be, so I really shouldn't be too surprised! Like I said in my review, if the unique ambience and atmosphere of the South Carolina Low Country doesn't really fan that simmering romance into a raging inferno, there's no hope for it whatsoever! Still, I'd sure hate to have to ride all the way across the North American continent in a SCHOOL BUS...Oi, talk about butt fatigue! I guess having a certain tall red gentlemen along for the ride would make things a bit easier, though, and I'm sure from HIS perspective, that old bus beats a freakin' LAWNMOWER any day of the week, lol!
And he didn't exactly STEAL the bus, now did he, since Frankie(whom I suspect was in on that plot from the start, if not the one who came up with it)actually did hand him the key!

pitbulllady

So, I guess that means that Frankie stole it, cause it ain't her bus either!8D
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Don't kill me, Frankie fans, I didn't mean to insult the precious....

We don't know that for sure; Frankie certainly must be the one who carries insurance on the bus, so it's not inconceivable that she is listed as one of the owners. Usually, in most US states, the person who usually operates a motor vehicle, unless they're a minor, is the one who has to carry insurance on it, and therefore is the one whose name will appear on the vehicle registration. Even if it belongs to Foster's Home(and it probably was donated to such), Frankie, being an employee/family member, would be considered an owner. Frankie is certainly the one who'd most miss the bus, since she depends on it for HER transportation, in any case. Besides, I don't think that Madame Foster would mind too much if Wilt decided to take his sweetie on a cross-country drive. I just can't bear the thought of having to make what would be about a four-day trip by CAR(which is probably a whole lot faster and more dependable), let alone a bus-I can barely stand a trip to Charleston in a bus from where I work, which is only two hours away, but then, at least Wilt and Zig-Zag don't have to put up with a busload of screaming fifth graders, either.

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