A mysterious girl's Home for Imaginary Mess

[A mysterious girl]

Woo!!! Finally, I finished my first fan-fic :D (well, at least the first chapter).
Here it is:
Mainly Zany (http://a-mysteriousgirl.deviantart.com/art/Mainly-Zany-Chapter-1-78162938)(oh, what a name for a fan-fic...)

Uh... just please, read my comments.

[antgirl1]

I love it so far. Keep it up, please. :)

[A mysterious girl]

Thanks! :D
Um... I'll try to post the next part soon, even if I was going to post it until the last days of March.... Let me see if I can finish it before... :P

[A mysterious girl]

The next part, wherein everyone stops liking my fan-fic.
click if you want to read (http://a-mysteriousgirl.deviantart.com/art/Mainly-Zany-Chapter-2-1-79593603)

But if you wasted your time reading it, you should waste your time reading my comments.

[Cassini90125]

Read it, and I find it quite intriguing. ;)

[A mysterious girl]

That's the point! :slybendy: :scaryberry:
By the way, any mistakes?

[Big Daddy]

I hardly noticed any mistakes at all. You've done a great job writing this story so far. :)

I love the Zamy character. I don't know why, but for some strange reason, I think about Mandy from The Grim Adventures when I read her character. I know that's not how it's intended, but I just get that feeling from the way you described her.

And poor Mac. His cousins are like Terrence-Clones or something. Having to deal with one is a lot worse than dealing with three.:P I like how you'd given them all specific names that are easy to follow. Alexander, to me, seemed like the laziest one of the bunch, just wanting to sit and watch, instead of being part of all the bullying.8D

Can't wait to read more.:D

[A mysterious girl]

I hardly noticed any mistakes at all. You've done a great job writing this story so far. :)

I love the Zamy character. I don't know why, but for some strange reason, I think about Mandy from The Grim Adventures when I read her character. I know that's not how it's intended, but I just get that feeling from the way you described her.

And poor Mac. His cousins are like Terrence-Clones or something. Having to deal with one is a lot worse than dealing with three.:P I like how you'd given them all specific names that are easy to follow. Alexander, to me, seemed like the laziest one of the bunch, just wanting to sit and watch, instead of being part of all the bullying.8D

Can't wait to read more.:D


Thanks a lot! :D
Ha, sometimes Zamy also reminds me Mandy. But she was never intended to be like her. Not to mention that Zamy isn't that mean.

By the way, here's (http://a-mysteriousgirl.deviantart.com/art/Mainly-Zany-Chapter-2-2-80555767) the next part.

[A mysterious girl]

Don't know if you noticed or not, ^
however, the second part of
the second chapter is over there ^ up, up, up

And the next one is here (http://a-mysteriousgirl.deviantart.com/art/Mainly-Zany-Chapter-3-81479866)

[Big Daddy]

Oh! I'm sorry, mysterious girl.:wiltshock:

I've been so busy lately. I read the second part to chapter two, and it's really awesome stuff. I love Bloo's reaction to Zamy's name, it was so expected of him to make such a remark. And I'd love to get to know some of Zamy's imaginary friends. (Wonder why she blanked out for a moment there?:macwor:)

On my way to read Chapter 3, let you know what I think after I've read it.:bloogrin:


EDIT: Just finished reading Chapter 3. Poor Zamy! Her brothers are nothing but stupid, unholy, no-good jerks!:edmad: I hope she can stay at Foster's.

But who was the blond young man at the end? Sounds familiar. That part really had me anxious to read the next chapter. You're doing awesome so far, mysterioius girl. Keep it up! You've already got my attention.;)

[A mysterious girl]

Oh! I'm sorry, mysterious girl.:wiltshock:

I've been so busy lately. I read the second part to chapter two, and it's really awesome stuff. I love Bloo's reaction to Zamy's name, it was so expected of him to make such a remark. And I'd love to get to know some of Zamy's imaginary friends. (Wonder why she blanked out for a moment there?:macwor:)

On my way to read Chapter 3, let you know what I think after I've read it.:bloogrin:


EDIT: Just finished reading Chapter 3. Poor Zamy! Her brothers are nothing but stupid, unholy, no-good jerks!:edmad: I hope she can stay at Foster's.

But who was the blond young man at the end? Sounds familiar. That part really had me anxious to read the next chapter. You're doing awesome so far, mysterioius girl. Keep it up! You've already got my attention.;)


:D Thanks a lot! You don't know how much it means for me! :D

Haha, yes, you'll eventually get to know her IFs :cheesegrin: ... maybe... who knows.

Oh, and who is the blond man is over here. (http://a-mysteriousgirl.deviantart.com/art/Mainly-Zany-Chapter-4-84009340) The longest and last chapter. Hope you like it.

P.S. Don't get disappointed if some of my next episodes are too boring, they will get better.

[A mysterious girl]

OMG, how much time has it passed? :wiltshock:
It takes me AGES to write a single parragraph...

So, at last I wrote the next chapter of the next ep (http://a-mysteriousgirl.deviantart.com/art/The-Bugging-Bag-Chapter-1-92359989). A bit boring, since it's merely a "filling episode" XD

Hopefully I won't take much to post what's next... :P