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Fomalhaut
08-27-2006, 10:14 AM
To those who have read my trilogy so far, here's the link to Long Forgotten Feelings - just added the very last chapter! Reviews are welcome.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2714646/1/

To those who haven't, search for "Fomalhaut" on ff.net to find them.
1st part: The Destiny of an Imaginary Friend (Incomplete) - it's about an IF, Shaula, and her (pretty weird) arrival at Foster's.
2nd part: Love at First Fight - Terrence gets a crush on Shaula's evil creator, Sheila, and she has plans that involve him against Foster's.
3rd part: Long Forgotten Feelings: Sheila's plan unfolds...
Sparky
08-27-2006, 11:42 AM
That was a good ending!!

(What happened to Shaula 2?)
Fomalhaut
08-27-2006, 11:59 AM
She stayed with Sheila, of course.
Did you review?
Sparky
08-27-2006, 02:34 PM
Not yet.
Cassini90125
08-28-2006, 10:55 AM
I read it, and I was happy. It's so nice to be able to read a good Foster's story once in a while. Well done! :)
Fomalhaut
08-28-2006, 11:21 AM
Can you tell me a bit more? One of your good critiques, detailed review I like so much? Please!
Cassini90125
08-28-2006, 01:00 PM
(Sighs) My work never ends. ;)

I'll have something up before long, although likely not until tomorrow. :)
Cassini90125
08-28-2006, 11:53 PM
Okay, the review is up. ;)
Fomalhaut
08-29-2006, 03:51 AM
Thanks a lot, have already read it!

Oh, my reasons for the ending:
- If there were 2 romances, the short plot would have looked like this:
A new friend arrives at Foster's, but her evil owner takes Terrence in a plan agains the home, but, thanks to the friend, who in the meantime has fallen in love, and returned, with Wilt, her plan is foiled. And she falls in love with Terrence, and they're happy. - now, that's when I say: "GAH! MARY_SUE!!!"
- 1 romance:... enough said.
- no romance at all: readers throwing bricks: I WAS EXPECTING ELSE, DUH!!!"

- only suggestions, as I did: I think it's fine.